Day 7 of NaPoWriMo… What I like about the prompts is that they invite me past my comfort zone, some more than others. Todays poetic invitation is to write a Valediction. A valediction is a farewell, a good bye, maybe a see ya later, or don’t let the door slam your ass on your way out. It can be sweet, longing, angry, grief ridden, funny.
BAD BREATH
I have breathed you in long enough
All that panting and ranting of your
exhales swarming out and around you
with no syncopation, no easy breezy
not even the beauty of a good storm
blowing in off your lake to feed my land
lifting my pulse to a gasp of want.
I have breathed you in long enough
Your bellow, and quaint-less murmurs
Your halitosis of negativity oxygenates
our shared spaces and I’m beginning
to catch my breath, hold my breath,
in your toxic presence.
I have breathed you in long enough
And all I want is to step out into
windy, breezy, easy swirl of air
that lifts my hair, kisses my skin
fills my lungs with the freshness
of anything other than your breathing
I have breathed you in
and now I breathe you out
catching the first sweet wind
that will fill my sails to take
me to ever so far from you
Tagged: bad breath, be here now, BREATH, DAILY POEM, GEEZER GIRL, geezer wisdom, JEANNE ADWANI, JEANNE BEAUCHAMP, LIVING IN THE METAPHOR, napowrimo, valediction
